Sunday, 24 May 2015

Script for film noir assignment


Scene 1 - office 





Victoria : Mr Montgomery

Detective : Ah hello Victoria, long time no see 

Victoria : Sorry for coming at such short notice

Detective : no problem, anything for an old friend like yourself.

Detective : how can I help?

Victoria : for the past days I have felt. fairly uncomfortable 

Detective : explain?

Victoria : As in I feel like someone has been watching me, stalking my every move and it is now beginning to worry me 

Detective : when did this start?

Victoria : It started last week.. I was walking home from work and I felt like I was being watched 
(flashback)
Victoria : Oh! and just last night I had received a threatening letter in my mailbox and it was quite frightening.. so I called you hoping you would be able to help.

(flashback)


detective : i see.. that is quite—

Victoria : Oh I almost forgot! last night I found this (holds up button) 

detective : how do you know this is related to this?

Victoria : I live alone in a new house and this is off of a man’s shirt so it must be his! could you maybe use this to find this man?

Detective : sure i’ll look into it for you, I wouldn't worry about it too much you are in my safe hands


Victoria : thank you, you have a good day 


( she steps in elevator)


Detective : Victoria 


( door is closing) 

Victoria : Detective 

camera zooms down to see the missing button from his shirt. 



























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